KO One DeDe Version

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Many people say My KO One is good but i don't know I guess it's time for a share now haha lol well I don't have those fan fic pages i post them on my blog but i'll post half for your guys choice of reading if you like it tell me because i take comments lol

In the class of KO One only the strong are in there....this when the story begins It was a quiet day and Jiro the innocent boy whose parents are priest was going to school. He was saying good bye to his parents and he ride his bike to school but don't under estimate his powers because after stoping at a bus stop his bike became a motorcycle and he dress from an innocent boy to a more gangster guy. Jiro is the leader of the KO Class he's in the KO Chart as number 3. Jiro have never met any competition he can't handle. Except for the teacher yes you guys he's in love with the teacher. But Jiro wouldn't realize 3 people will come to his life and change him...who will these 3 poeple be we have to wait and see.
It was school time and Jiro was the same old... nothing exciting when all of a sudden someone walk in. He was handsome and have a deadly smile who is he? His name is Calvin the rich boy whose dad is the leader of the traid gang... also he stand at the KO Chart as number 3. He like to use Shakespear during he fight someone. Calvin walked in and everyone gave him a glare...Jin Bao San who knew everything about the KO Chart had gave a speech about him.
Calvin walked in and then look at everyone, he then sat down and say that this class isn't all that...then the class went crazy but then Jiro told them to shut up and sit down. In that class there was a girl name Melody she rule the girl section of the KO Class maybe due to her relation on knowing Jiro for the a long time and she had fallen for Jiro.Then a couple minutes later a very cold breeze came by no its not the wind it was Arron. He seem cold and he don't talk alot. When he came in one of the guy ask why he's in this class he gave them a cold glare and it scare them away and he sat down not saying a word.
Jin Bao San who try to mess with him then got scare because his eyes gave off an energy of a warning sign. Class was about to start but then a girl who seem very unfamiliar walked in. She didn't wear the school outfit, she seem different from everyone she wore jeans and the school shirt and she wore glasses. Melody seem as if the girl is lost and told the other 2 girls to pick on her. At that time Jiro,Calvin,and Arron are paying attention to this girl who is she?The girl from Melody group walk toward her and ask her Is she out of her mind to be walking in the KO class and people who walk in here have to be tough and streng not nerdy looking like her.
Bebe smile and give a look and say is this class 1504 and the girl was like Yes this is class 1504 and then Bebe say then I'm not in the wrong class then. Bebe walked to a seat that is open.... the other girl just gave a shrug and then Melody couldn't take it because a strange girl had just diss one of her group member and when Bebe was about to sit down Melody grab her chair and say that She need to earn the right to sit down. Then Bebe without a word smile and she threw her backpack in the air and her pencil and with one move she kick the chair and made Melody fall flat on her face. The chair landed on the ground and Bebe sat down and her backpack landed on the desk and she caught the pencil before it ever touching the ground. Jiro and Jin Bao San clapped.

If you guys like it Episode one is on my blog here's the url
www.wretch.cc/blog/Diane209&article_id=8483912

[mygurl]

i've read this and its really good... i can imagine the girl is you lol cuz she possess every of your qualities....

[xoxdreamgurlazn209]

jeesh you guys are making me blush i'm not that good lol its all my imagination

[cherrie]

Hey sis... what are you saying? It's really good! I loved it!!!

LOL... That's what I'm about to say too Anna! It's her... Bebe is Dede! So COOL!!! And yes, I've read these episodes already. Actually, I have them in my pC... And I can't wait to read the rest, am so behind already! hehehe

[mygurl]

do you mind if i save it diane... i wanna keep it as remembrance lol...i'll print it out nicely.... and make a book for myself.....

[xoxdreamgurlazn209]

haha no problem anna lol i think imma post episode 3 on soon haha lol since i havent upload it for a while haha

[mygurl]

you better diane or else i dunno what im goin to do nowadays... lol, not sure whether cherrie have told you my quit of the job or not.....

[xoxdreamgurlazn209]

yes i heard my sister but yet i still love u n if dats not da rite job den its not no pressure take ur time on finding a job u care about ok lol

[mygurl]

xoxdreamgurlazn209 said:

yes i heard my sister but yet i still love u n if dats not da rite job den its not no pressure take ur time on finding a job u care about ok lol

lol thanks diane and sure now i have even more time to read your writing just that you have to squeeze lots of idea to write...... ;D ;D ;D

[xoxdreamgurlazn209]

ahh sis that soo kind but see i told u sis dat u n cherrie are da onliee one dat read my script haha

[mygurl]

no DeDe....sure more people will read, just that you need more times to prove that people are actually reading your work.......

[xoxdreamgurlazn209]

Here is Episode 1 part 2 haha lol since i know on my blog its hard to read

Then the homeroom teacher walked in and tell everyone to take their seat. Then she had told everyone there will be 3 new student Arron,Calvin,and BeBe. As class started Calvin had say some insulting stuff to the teacher that made Jiro mad. Calvin had say that a teacher suppose to dress professional not some one who work in the street. Jiro was furious because he hates people who insult the person he like. So he threw a paper at CALVIN. Calvin open it and it say I challenge you Da Dong. Calvin smile and he put his thumb up and then lowering it down representing you're going down. It was afterschool and everyone was on Jiro side and Calvin was standing there and wasn't scare at all. Jiro then say Party time and he threw his jacket toward Jin Bao San. Calvin then say Cut the talking and show me what you got. But when they were about to fight a soft sweet sound came from the music room and the music had come from the piano. Who was playing it? It was Arron the new mysterious cold student. Jiro and Calvin can't stop it but started to melt to the sound of the song because it was soft and sad and it made them misses their parents and Jiro and Calvin lower their powers and hug each other.

Calvin think to himself the music of the song for some reason make me want to hug this stupid hard headed guy. Jiro think to himself this sound make me miss my mom and for some reason i feel close to this rude self center guy. After that Calvin left back home going throw an alley way. But he got stopped but these group of gang who was lead by Huang Wan Bo. Calvin wasn't afraid and ready to fight when Jiro pop up and say It's not fair for all of you to fight one person, Calvin then say this isn't your matter leave. Jiro then say well you're wrong i like to fight so it is my matter. Huang Wan Bo then say You kids are messing with the wrong group and he say GO. And everyone came with thier weapons. The reason Huang Wan Bo was so mad its was because Calvin had he had beaten them up badly. They all got their ass kick by Jiro and his pan and Calvin and him had great fun. They walk to the beach and Calvin was scare and worry for his dad life. Jiro was their to comfort him and then Calvin phone ring and his dad told him that he was safe. Jiro and Calvin became best friends but Calvin still say they have to fight each other sooner or later because they are the same KO. Chart rank. Then they both went to a food stand to eat at night. Arron was there as well and Jin Bao San and his group had secretly spy on him for hours. Huan Wan Bo had tooken over the stand and had put sleeping medicine in Jiro and Calvin food that made them weak. Arron say that and told them to leave the 2 guys alone. Huan Wan Bo laughed and hit Arron's head and say Little Kid Go home to your MOM. Arron then say I hate people who hit my head. Huan Wan Bo laugh at Arron and hit his head again. Arron eyes become more vicious and dangerous and he say I TOLD YOU NOT TO HIT MY HEAD! His right hand startd to gain a blue power and he hit him. Jin Bao San and his crew close their eyes but when they open it they say what had happen and Jin Bao San say Lucky that wasn't us thank god i didn't touch hsi head.


Jin Bao San then explain that Arron was a cold hearted mysterious background person in the KO Chart who is a KO.4 . After being save Jiro and Calvin they didn't knew at first but then Jin Bao San had told them what had happen and Calvin and Jiro both agree to make Arron as their brother and they had confronted him afterschool..Arron first really seem like he didn't want to but then he smile and agree to be their friend but Jiro then say that his right hand better not hurt them and Arron say his right hand never hurt his brothers and they did the knuckle thing..The knuckle thing is like a special handshake that make That represent a promise but still the identity of Bebe was not reveal who was she..she was smart but is she weak? Bebe who wasn't in class today had drawn to many wonders. Afterward Calvin,Jiro,and Arron was walking out of school deciding to get some food when they saw a girl who look familiar running toward them and a group of guys chasing after her..truthfully its Bebe she had save a group of girls in her neighborhoods from the evil perverted guys who try to prositute them. Jiro,Arron,and Calvin can't take it anymore and decided to help her. Jiro then stop the group and say I hate guys that are ugly like you picking on girls like that and pointed at BeBe and he took out his pan.

Bebe who duck the perverted guy bat crash into Arron and both of their eyes met each other. Then one of the guy the leader say Get her she made us lose a business matter. BeBe got up and then Arron and the others bloack her and say Who ever touch her have to go through us and Jiro threw his pan and hit everyone.Then Jiro,Calvin,Arron grab Bebe and ran to the beach Bebe who was tired...and say thanks all the guy for saving her. Then Jiro was like those guys have some nerves to try to kill a girl in daytime. But Bebe who doesn't like to owe people favors took all the 3 guys to her neighborhood. Everyone in her neighborhood seem to be grateful to her and ask her if she was hungry or anything she need. Jiro,Calvin,and Arron wonder why the neighbors are so grateful to her and she brought the guy to a place where she like to eat. The owner seem very nice and seem to know her very well like what special food she like. Bebe who was eating look up and smile and ask the guys how come they were looking at her in a werid way and not eating? Calvin then ask Bebe who are you really? And Bebe was like The truth would be reveal soon and they ask her how come she didn't show up to class Bebe just got up and say I'm done thanks for saving me and she gave the money to the owner and she walked away. Jiro then say Who is this new girl? Arron look at her as she walked away.

The Reason why BeBe didn't show to class it's because she had promise her neighrborhood that she would protect them because she came back, she had save her neighborhood from loan shark,gangster,and perverted guys that try to steal innocent young girls. She is like their soldier, because the police wouldn't do anything about it so she took matters in her own hand. She vow to be there for her neighbors and if anything happen they can rely on her....It was another day of school Jiro,Calvin,Arron went to class as usual but then Jin Bao San say he have an annoucement and walked in front of the class and say That it took me sometime now but with my brains i had find out who this mysterious new girl is. Jin Bao San then say her name is Bebe she lived in America. She is the famous Gangster Princess the number one girl who fight hard. In the KO Chart she is the only girl who's stand as number 4. Her powers are quickness and mysterious. She rule her school in America and her parents suddenly send her back to Taiwan to study. She isn't any ordinary girl because in her school even though she is bad many teachers accepted who she is and she had gained the teachers respect.

She is super smart and some teachers are disappointed that she chose the other road because they believe she can be more. Bebe is not the typical girl she have brains and power many people bow down to her with no regards and she don't use her fist but her knowledge. Her special weapon is her golden bat but she don't need it because with her power with one fist you could fly a mile away. Bebe style is quiet but yet very clever. She is the KO princess and that she under estimate everyone...Jiro,Calvin,and Arron then look at each other and knew that they now have to ask her to join their group. So afterschool they saw Bebe and follow her. Bebe who sense that someone was following her, quickly ran to the beach and then she pick up 3 rocks and threw it at them. She then say Reveal yourself. Jiro and the others duck the rocks and then Jiro was say You trying to kill us we save you yesterday.

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Bebe then turn around and say Oh my gosh! It's you guys are you guys ok? And Jiro say I'm a man of steel nothing can hurt me. Then Calvin say so your Bebe the famous girl who everyone been talking about these past years,and then she say So you've guys find out and then Jiro was say You're good ,you're very good, at hiding your identity. She smile and say well if you walk into a KO Class you need to know the people before revealing yourself. Jiro then say you know us? She then say of course i do before i walk to a class I do my research. Your Jiro Da Dong your dad and mom are a religious person your the KO.3 and your special weapon is a frying pan. Jiro then smile and nodded his head. She then continue on and say your Calvin the son of the traid leader your weapon is a sword and you like Shakespear and you would fight anyone whose in your way. Calvin clapped his hand and you are Arron your a mysterious character in the KO Chart very quiet and yet powerful your weapon is your right hand and you hate people messing with your head am i right? Arron then say Yup you are good. Jiro then say Since you know so much about us and we seem to have destiny together I'll take you as my little sister. Bebe then say Me? Your lil sister I don't think I want a stupid brother now would I? Calvin then laugh and say haha she call you stupid. And then Bebe say But a stupid brother wouldn't be bad now. And then Jiro was like So its final you'll join us and she look at all 3 of the guys in front of her and then Jiro,Calvin,and Arron took out their fist and Bebe then took out her hand from her pocket and hit their knuckles as a deal.

Then the next day school starts. Jiro,Calvin,and Arron look at the watch from the board and was wondering how come Bebe hadn't show up yet. Calvin then look at Jiro and say Aye Do you think Bebe would lie to us? Jiro then say Bebe is in the KO Chart she wouldn't go back on a promise and I don't think she would lie to us. Arron then say I was thinking the same thing too. Bebe who was walking through the hall way was now dress different. She didn't wear her good girl clothese anymore but She had to wear the school uniform since her deadline was over. She was wearing a school skirt and her hair down and her hair was straight not in a ponytail like it was on the first day of school. The tip of her hair was now light blue just like how people descibe the Gangster Princess look like and she now don't have glasses on but contact lens. She wore hoop earings that say GP represending Gangster Princess. Her shoes had graffiti on it and it say BEBE and her backpack had totally change too it's now tagged on it and say Fight is Delight and as she walked in Arron,Calvin,and Jiro mouth drops. And then everyone froze and it seem like a spotlight was on her.

Then Calvin was thinking in his head wow what happen to her...Arron thinks a girl who look like a nerd all of a sudden change to a strong person is this really her?...Jiro was like wow she's HOT and then he was like wait wait it's my little sis can't think that way. He got up and say Aye no looking turn away and then he say From now on Bebe is in our KO Class and she be in charge of the girls section you got it and then he told Jin Bao San to move her seat next to Arron....The teacher walked in and then she drop her books and she say Wow Bebe seem like you change your whole style and you're starting to wear the school outfit and she say You look nice and Bebe just smile.

When class was over Jiro,Calvin,and Arron decided to go out but they had to wait for Bebe. Jiro walked back inside of the classroom, and ask if she was ready and Bebe say Hold on and Jiro walked back out again. Melody who glare at Bebe and Bebe saw her. Bebe then walked up to her and she say You don't like me do you?And Melody then say No, the other girls might be afraid of you but I'm Not... but since Jiro say that you're our leader from now on so I have to listen to you but that doesn't mean I respect you, and Bebe then smile and say I like your confident and straight forwardness many girls don't say those daring words to me! But back to the subject you like Jiro don't you and Melody nodded her head and then Bebe say I don't like Jiro that way Ok me and him are only brothers and sisters. She then told Melody I can help you and my brother connect. Melody then say Why Should I trust You? and then Bebe was like Fine then. Jiro then came in and grab Bebe backpack and say Aye Melody why you still here and he was like hurry up little sister the others are waiting and Bebe walked out and winked at Melody and Melody smile.

Bebe ride the motorcycle with Jiro and Calvin and Arron ride in Calvin's BMW. They went out and eat and then Jiro took Bebe home and Bebe then told Jiro that he was a great brother ever and hug him and walked in her house. Then a couple of days went by Bebe couldn't be find afterschool and Jiro and Calvin had to do some tasks because of the police officers thought that they took part in a fight. People don't know how come Bebe was never afterschool. Arron who had to stay back to get his late homework from his math teacher, afterschool but before he left he heard a sweet music coming from the music room. He walked by and he listen closely to the song and an image of dreamy collision came through his head and the sound was coming from the piano, a girl whose dress in a total different outfit was playing the piano with all her concentrating...Arron thinks to himself I never heard a music like this for a while it had emotions and style who ever this person is very unique.This person seem to use her sould to music and she seem so familiar. BeBe then got up and Arron saw Bebe and say was Bebe? Bebe turn around and She was shock and say Arron? Arron then say Bebe I never knew you know how to play the piano and then she smile and she say No one knew. Arron then say Whats wrong and BeBe then say I'm trying to have a dance practice but no one knew how to play the piano and Arron then just sat down and started to play the piano and Bebe then smile and start dancing with the ribbon and they both enjoy their time.

A couple weeks pass by nothing is very that exciting just Bebe and Jiro tend to argue now and then but everything seem normal. Then the teacher walked in and told the class that she want them to do good in school and Jiro totally agree with all her words well he would agree anything due to the fact that he likes her so then the teacher had assign the position and everyone have to study after school she say that Arron will tutor math, Bebe will teach English and Calvin will teach history and all 3 of them stop what they were doing and say why us? and the teacher was explain why it was because all of them are very smart and talented. All 3 of them didn't have nothing to say and they just had to accept it because Jiro was giving them a look. Arron and Jiro are going to the libary since Jiro want to make the teacher proud and show her that he was smart. Calvin was looking for Bebe to discuss activites about the program. Calvin went pass the music room and saw that there were a light and Calvin saw Bebe amazingly dancing he lost his words and Calvin then think why my heart seem to stop as if the time has going slowly and I can see her image clear like a swain in a lake. He then accidentally hit the door and Bebe was shocked and she fell then Calvin ran in and caught her and Bebe now was laying on top of him but her cell phone had fallen off her pockets and Calvin can see Bebe phone broke. He then ask Bebe if she was ok and Bebe was like I'm fine and then she saw that Calvin shirt was ripped and then she got up and then she told Calvin to Wait.. she then change to her regular clothes and took Calvin to a store and told him to stand still and she look at his size. Calvin who think to himself How can i let a girl do this to me? She then choose an shirt and told him to change and he did what she had told him to do and she pay for the shirt and then say Your shirt is mess up but a little fix up it'll be ok i can do that for you and your shirt be new again and Calvin took his shirt and he say It's ok. And then Bebe just smile and say Since we are here lets go eat and Calvin say Ok and they ate and Calvin told Bebe some joke and they laugh and smile lightly and then Calvin took Bebe home Bebe say Bye to him and Calvin smile sweetly as he drove home.


The next day it was afterschool and Bebe was with the guys like always. Calvin then told Bebe he had something for her. Calvin then bought Bebe a new cell phone it was the new expensive one and it's the latest edition. He then say Yesterday I saw you drop your phone and its broken I think I should buy you a new one to replace the old one. Arron who just look and Jiro was still trying to think how come he never heard hissister told him. Bebe then say Thank you she say no guys have done this for me and gave Calvin a kiss on the cheek. Calvin then touch his cheek and then Arron and Jiro was shocked that Bebe did that. Jiro then got mad and argue with Calvin. Jiro say Aye Calvin we are bois what are you doing to my sister don't make me fight you. Calvin then say I just got her a phone and Jiro was like a phone that get a kiss what's this...I'll give you a present you give me a kiss day? Did you do something to her tell me now.

[mygurl]

omg diane...this is kinda long...i need time to read...anyway glad that you share it here

[ilovechenyirux3]

OMG is nice!